tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3806358642017855541.post5334678839630062242..comments2023-04-28T23:21:34.160+12:00Comments on Piripi @ Westland High School: Monica Hulmehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05646750325681145453noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3806358642017855541.post-3077961258481449962019-09-06T12:32:34.096+12:002019-09-06T12:32:34.096+12:00okokPhilliphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02296351539959432640noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3806358642017855541.post-4394982438930622882019-09-06T12:32:01.044+12:002019-09-06T12:32:01.044+12:00thanks ill trythanks ill tryPhilliphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02296351539959432640noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3806358642017855541.post-46364172149388983732019-08-16T11:03:50.814+12:002019-08-16T11:03:50.814+12:00Kia Ora my name is rollin i really like your story...Kia Ora my name is rollin i really like your story i enjoyed reading it but maybe check your spelling and adding more detail ThanksAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3806358642017855541.post-43725644439073258712018-08-23T13:42:04.287+12:002018-08-23T13:42:04.287+12:00Kia Ora I am Carrie from Papakura Central School!
...Kia Ora I am Carrie from Papakura Central School!<br />I really enjoyed your writing especially the part when when it talks about the glowing giraffe. Something that I might fix about your writing is double checking all of your spelling and capital letters before publishing which also means re-reading. Another one is adding titles to your post. Other than that you blog is perfect, Keep up the great work!<br />Thanks, Carrie. Check out my blog while you're at it - http://pcscarriet.blogspot.com/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com